The chart and table below give information about tourists at a particular holiday resort in australia. Sumerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparations where relevant

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The chart and table

shows

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that most of the

tourist

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tourists

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that came to visit

holiday

resort

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resorts

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in Australia came from Asia. They prefer to stay at

5-star

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a 5-star

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hotel and enjoy sightseeing. But, by average day length of stay Asia

tourist

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tourists

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spend the shortest period of time staying in the

resort

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, the least number of

tourist

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tourists

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that took a trip to Australia came from other regions. They usually

stays

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for 10 days and they love to surf. Based on

average

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the average

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length of stay, european

tourist

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tourists

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stays

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for the longest period in the

holiday

resort

which is 16 days. European

tourist

mostly spend their activity by swimming or sunbathing. American

tourist

also

spend their

holiday

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pretty long time which is 14 days, they tend to stay at 4-star

hotel

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hotels

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and enjoy sightseeing

the

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apply

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nature. In conclusion,

tourist

love to spend their

holiday

resort

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a resort

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for quite

long

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a long

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time and

having

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fun with various main

activity

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activities

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. The most popular main activity during

this

holiday

is sightseeing.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words tourist, holiday, resort with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 6 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
17Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

167 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

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The chart and table below give information about tourists at a particular holiday resort in australia. Sumerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparations where relevant

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The digital age has made the gap between the younger and older generations wider. Give reasons for your own answer.

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With advancing technology, the development of automated vehicles is becoming reality. In your opinion, what are the advantages and disadvantages of self-driving vehicles?