The table below gives details of world electricity production by renewable sources in the four years between 2009 and 2012.
The given table illustrates the global electricity generation from six kinds of renewable
sources
,measured in trillion watt hours (TWh
), from 2009 to 2012.
Overall
, it is evident that all of the given sources
usage increased throughout the Change noun form
sources'
source's
period
. While
the most popular field was the hydraulic sources
, the least popular category was the
solar energy during the Correct article usage
apply
period
.
In detail, hydraulic sources
represented in
the highest numbers over the Change preposition
apply
period
, in the beginning
3329 Add the comma(s)
beginning,
TWh
Add a missing verb
were genereted
genereted
by Correct your spelling
generated
jydraulic
Correct your spelling
hydraulic
sources
and this
figure gradually increased ant
reached Correct your spelling
and
at
3663.4 Change preposition
apply
TWh
in 2012. As for solar sources
, whereas
this
figure rose more than five times (from 21 to 104.5 TWh
), it had the lowest percentages between 2009 and 2012. The usage of the remaining categories had also
rose
, particularly, wind Change the verb form
risen
sources
almost doubled, it accounnted
for 276.4 Correct your spelling
accounted
TWh
in the beginning and reached at
534 Change preposition
apply
TWh
in
the end of the Change the preposition
at
period
. Turning to the category of bio-mass
and geothermal Correct your spelling
biomass
sources
steadily increased.Submitted by ilaydailday on
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