The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
This
line graph provides data regarding vehicle robberies in four distinguished countries over ten years from 1990 to 1999. It is evident from the information supplied that the number of vehicle losses in Sweden saw an upward trajectory;
while
the other three countries saw a similar trend by having some fluctuation and maintaining the same level throughout the period.
To begin
with, vehicle
thefts
in Sweden hovered at the same level at around 8,000 from 1990 to 1992, before the rates experienced a gradual increase in the following four years to around 13,000.
This
number
then
plateaued till 1998 and witnessed a slight increase at just under 15,000 in 1999.
On the other hand
, in France and Canada, the number of
thefts
in vehicles remained the same both at the beginning and
at the end
of the period, with around 7,000 cases. The lowest point in Canada reached approximately 5,000
thefts
both in 1994 and 1998. In Great Britain, the rate of
thefts
reached its peak of 20,000 incidents in 1993 and 1997 and had the lowest point at around 16,000 in 1994.
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