Today's essay topic: *People in all modern societies use drugs, but today's youth are experimenting with both legal and illegal drugs, and at an increasingly early age. Some sociologists claim that parents and other members of society often set a bad example. Discuss the causes and some effects of widespread drug use by young people in modern day society. Make any recommendations you feel are necessary to help fight youth drug abuse.*

In the modern world,

youngsters

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social skills are underdeveloped. Which develops poor communities and many other issues. I totally agree with the statement that people spend more

time

at work than at home. First of all, the teenage

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a very sensitive and crucial

time

for every kid.

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has to play a major role in guiding them about bad or good .As

minor

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are not mature to make better decisions, they always look for better support. No one else can provide them with better

advise

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,

instead

of their own

parents

. In the absence of their

parents

, they always search for a second option. where the common search they do

on

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online and start connecting more to the virtual world

instead

of the real

society

. These days it's very common to see in

society

that most

of

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the

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teenagers

are lost in electronic gadgets.

As a result

, its common behaviour is developing not to talk and share things with anybody.

Moreover

, youngster's brains are not trained to carry that much vast information from online sources. which developed sciatic among them.

secondly

, most of the

parents

spend most of their

time

at work to make extra income. and they forget that their main asset is children's. once the

time

passes and

teenagers

who become adults, they do not care for their own

parents

. which creates a lot of disputes in

society

and families.

Thirdly

, In the absence of the right guidance

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teenagers

develop some criminal behaviours in people. which is very dangerous to the

society

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last

, I agree that

parents

spend their most of

time

at work. which leads to poor development of social behaviour of

teenagers