In order to study at university students are required to par expensive tuition fees. Not all students can afford then so some people think that university education should be free for everyone. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays,
education
is getting expensive and not every individual can afford Correct pronoun usage
it by
by
their own. Change preposition
on
Hence
a debate has been sparked that university education
should be free to all; however
, I partially agree with the statement and will provide its justification in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin
with, higher education
is essential for everyone
to get a good job. However
, there are numerous talented students who belong to poor families and cannot pay their tuition fees by
their own. So, to promote these talented Change preposition
on
people
, the government should pay their tuition fees so that they can study and achieve huge success. For instance
, in the recent batch of I.A.S. selection in the Indian government jobs, top positions were secured by three people
who got their education
only through the help of the N.G.O. Therefore
, to attain top positions filled with the most talented people
, the government should provide higher education
to everyone
.
On the other hand
, this
trend can also
be misused by a few people
as free education
might not give them the responsibility to work part-time. Moreover
, they will be irresponsible and will get into bad habits. For example
, earlier students were working while
their studies to get money for the
expenses and to pay their tuition fees but with Change the word
their
this
they will not work and Add a comma
this,
instead
waste their whole time. Consequently
, they will not gain experience and responsibilities to achieve the goals in
limited resources. Change preposition
with
Hence
, free education
should be in terms of scholaship
or partial waiver.
Correct your spelling
scholarship
scholarships
To conclude
, I would like to assert that, though higher education
is important for every student and should be available to everyone
making it completely free for everyone
will make them irresponsible. So there should be some terms enforced.Submitted by hiteshpaul on
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