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The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps illustrate the changes made to City Hospital from 2007 until 2010. In general, the entire car park of
staff
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 and the public has been divided into significant areas, which have added new facilities,
such
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 as
bus
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station
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 and roundabouts. In 2007, the hospital
road
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 had three
bus
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 stops on either side, and the common car park was located on the east side of the
road
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. It severed both public and
staff
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 members.
However
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, they demolished those old
bus
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 stops today and constructed a new
bus
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station
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 southwest of the map, connected to two roundabouts at both ends of Hospital
Road
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. In 2010, some significant changes could be seen. The parking lot is opposite the
bus
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station
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 and is only for
staff
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. The public car park has moved to the east side of the City Hospital and has access to Ring
Road
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 around the hospital, which can lead to a
staff
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 parking lot and the
bus
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station
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words staff, bus, station, road with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • traffic flow
  • road access
  • ring road
  • bus stops
  • bus station
  • congestion
  • parking facilities
  • pedestrian crossings
  • vehicular flow
  • organizational structure
  • accessibility
  • enhancements
  • configuration
  • dedicated
  • diverting traffic
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