The diagrams below give information about the manufacture of frozen fish pies. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below give information about the manufacture of frozen fish pies.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagrams below illustrate the production process of frozen
fish
pies.
Overall
, the pies are composed of three main ingredients,
fish
, sauce and potato. The potatoes are brought to the factory a lot sooner compared to the
fish
and once they are combined with the peas and sauce, they are wrapped and dispatched for
consuming
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. Looking at the diagrams in more detail, delivery of the potatoes occurs up to one month before the salmon. The former ingredient
then
goes through 5 various processes.
First
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they are cleaned,
then
peeled and sliced into a vertical shape before being placed in water to be boiled. They are
then
chilled and put into storage. The salmon are bought
to
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the factory 12 hours before they are
due to
be cooked.
This
fish
is fresh and is coated in lemon juice and salt before being cooked in a steam oven. Any skin and bones are
then
removed from the protein before it is officially inspected. Once the meat is satisfactory, it is mixed with already prepared sauce and peas and the stored potatoes.
This
is
then
all wrapped together and frozen and remains stored or ready to be
dispatced
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dispatched
.
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