The diagrams below give information about the manufacture of frozen fish pies. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below illustrate the production process of frozen

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pies.

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, the pies are composed of three main ingredients,

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, sauce and potato. The potatoes are brought to the factory a lot sooner compared to the

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and once they are combined with the peas and sauce, they are wrapped and dispatched for

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. Looking at the diagrams in more detail, delivery of the potatoes occurs up to one month before the salmon. The former ingredient

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goes through 5 various processes.

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they are cleaned,

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peeled and sliced into a vertical shape before being placed in water to be boiled. They are

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chilled and put into storage. The salmon are bought

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the factory 12 hours before they are

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be cooked.

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is fresh and is coated in lemon juice and salt before being cooked in a steam oven. Any skin and bones are

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removed from the protein before it is officially inspected. Once the meat is satisfactory, it is mixed with already prepared sauce and peas and the stored potatoes.

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all wrapped together and frozen and remains stored or ready to be

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dispatched

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