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The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts illustrate the proportion of population groups in two countries which are Italy and Yemen during a 50-year period starting in 2000.
Overall
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, the youngest country is Yemen
while
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 Italy had the biggest group of elderly
people
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.
Moreover
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, the number of teenagers group is decreased in both countries,
however
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, the percentage of over 60
years
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people
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 is increased noticeably. In 2000, half of the population of Yemen took by under 14
years
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 old juveniles following which, the rate of between 15 and 59
years
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 old group and old
people
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 were nearly 46% and 3.6% respectively. In future, it is anticipated that the second and
third place
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 groups will experience a large increase to reach about 57% and 5.7% respectively.
On the other hand
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, around a quarter of Italy nation contained by over 60
years
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people
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 in 2000,
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 it will witness a sharp increase which it will be 42%.
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, the figure of the new generation will be decreased in
this
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 country until 2050 from 14.3% to 11.5%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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