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In many countries today crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

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In recent times,
crime
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 novels and
TV
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crime
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dramas
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 have witnessed a surge in
popularity
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 in many countries.
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 essay will explore the reasons for
this
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 trend. As far as my opinion goes, the works of
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fiction
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 and non-
fiction
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 are important and should be embraced and celebrated for their significance. One reason for the growing
popularity
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 of
crime
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 books and
TV
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crime
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 series is their ability to provide an engaging and thrilling experience to audiences. These works of
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 create a sense of suspense and mystery which are essential components in captivating an audience's attention.
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, the inclusion of realistic settings and characters that the audience can identify with
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 adds to the appeal of these books and shows.
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, the British
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 drama "Broadchurch" is set in a small coastal town and explores the impact of a child's murder on the community, which is both relatable and captivating for the audience. Another reason for the
popularity
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 of
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 novels and
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crime
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dramas
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 is their capacity to satisfy human curiosity about
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 and the workings of the criminal mind.
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 is particularly evident in the sub-genre of forensic science
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,
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 as the
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 show "CSI:
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 Scene Investigation," which provides a glimpse into the workings of forensic science and criminal investigation. These shows tap into our fascination with
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 and our desire to understand the mechanisms behind criminal behaviour. In my opinion,
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fiction
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 and
TV
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crime
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dramas
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 are valuable sources of entertainment and education. They offer insights into the workings of the criminal justice system and the complexities of human behaviour.
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, they provide a platform for discussing social issues
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 as corruption, inequality, and justice.
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, the Netflix series "When They See Us" highlights the issue of racial profiling and wrongful imprisonment. In conclusion, the growing
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 of
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 novels and
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crime
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dramas
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 can be attributed to their ability to captivate audiences with engaging and thrilling narratives
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also
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 providing educational and social commentary. In my view, these works of
fiction
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 are an important cultural phenomenon that should be embraced and celebrated for their significant contributions to society.

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Support main points with more specific examples and explanations for improved clarity and depth.
task achievement
Address the task more fully by discussing why these genres are popular as per the prompt. Incorporate a broader range of ideas, explore each one fully and avoid generalized statements.
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Develop ideas clearly and comprehensively, ensuring that each paragraph presents a single, focused point that is thoroughly explained and supported.
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Use specific, detailed examples to enhance the relevant points in your discussion. Ensure these examples are directly linked to the ideas being discussed to demonstrate a deeper understanding of the genre's popularity.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • phenomenon
  • intrigue
  • enigma
  • compelling
  • addictive
  • chilling
  • forensics
  • procedural
  • thriller
  • suspense
  • psychological
  • criminalistics
  • deviant
  • intricate
  • red herrings
  • misdirection
  • sardonically
  • socioeconomic
  • catharsis
  • moral ambiguity
  • multidimensional
  • protagonist
  • antagonist
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