The bar chart below shows transport preferences among young people in four countries in a single year.

The bar chart below shows transport preferences among young people in four countries in a single year.
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The chart illustrates which means of transportation are preferred in four different nations among their younger generations.
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with, cars are shown as the most demanded option, especially in Italy where almost four-fifths selected it as their
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. The same goes for countries
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as The UK and The United States, both sharing a lucrative 60% of the total amount.
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France has vehicles as the second option which composes almost half the samples. Competing for the second-most used transport, bicycles represent over two-fifths of
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number in France,
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the remaining European regions have positioned it in second place as their predilect.
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, American bicycle users compose barely one-tenth of it.
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, motorcycles are the less attractive option for Europe, as countries like The UK and Italy have almost 10% of users,
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French motorists are slightly higher than their counterparts,
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, not ascending to more than 20%.
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, The United States is the only one that reaches 30% of said motorists.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • bar chart
  • transport preferences
  • young people
  • countries
  • specific year
  • most popular
  • mode of transport
  • car
  • public transport
  • cycling
  • walking
  • significant variations
  • preferred
  • least favored
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