The graph below shows how people buy music.

The graph below shows how people buy music.
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The line graph gives detailed information about how many percentages of people bought music in different gadgets in the space of 8 years(2011-2018).
Overall
,
it is clear that
the shares of "CDs purchased" were dominant
while
the "streams" had the lowest at the beginning of the period.
Moreover
, it is worth noting that "Downloads" witnessed a small fall despite some fluctuations over the period. In detail, music loaded to CDs was the most common among the public and it recorded the highest trend just under 55% in 2011. Following that, there was a slight decrease to around 20% until the end of the period.
Besides
that, "streams" experienced a significant increase in spite of being the least, wheres, in 2011, it was at roughly 10%,afterwards, there was a rise to 20% in 2015 and reached 40% in 2018.
In particular
, "Downloads" was in the middle 30% and 40% before increasing to nearly 43% in 2014.
Last
but not least, the figure for downloads went down noticeably to 30% in 2018.
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