You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in a country in 1950 and 2010. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below. You should write at least 150 words. Writing task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in a country in 1950 and 2010.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing task 1
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The Pie Charts
compares
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compare
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the trend in a
particualr
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particular
country
how
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in how
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working adults spend their
time
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on extra activities in five decades. In 1958, Working adults
spend
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spent
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third
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a third
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of their
time
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on
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apply
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working and 32
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percent
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per cent
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of
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time
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their time
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on
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apply
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sleeping. Comparing
this
Linking Words
to 2008, people spend more
time
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on
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apply
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working(42%) rather than sleeping(25%). The
time
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to travel to work
also
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varies in different
time
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frames - with 2
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percent
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per cent
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time
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spend
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spent
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on travelling to 8
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percent
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per cent
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time
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spend
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spent
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on travelling. The
time
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spent
on
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apply
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hanging out with friends/family in 1958 is considerably higher than the
time
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spent in 2008. 8
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percent
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per cent
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of
working
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the working
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population
tends
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tended
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to relax at home in 1958 and comparing
this
Linking Words
to 2008 which is significantly more in number. The
time
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spent
on
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apply
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staying at home in 2008 for working adults
is
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was
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13
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percent
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per cent
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. There
is
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was
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only
small
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a small
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increase
on
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in
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amount
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the amount
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of
time
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spent
on
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apply
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playing sports
in
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between
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1958 and 2008.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words time, percent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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