the chart below gives information about Southland's main exports in 2000, *20.., and future production for 2025

the chart below gives information about Southland's main exports in 2000, *20.., and future production for 2025
the bar chart depicts the data of Southland's export projects in three different periods starting in 2000 to 2023 and a prediction for 2025.
this
information has been calibrated in billions.
overall
, it is clearly seen that international tourism has risen over time.
in contrast
, meat products declined. first and foremost, international tourism experienced an increase in three different years.
in addition
, in 2000 exports gained 8
billion
, and after that kept increasing to nearly 9
billion
and expecting approximately 9,9
billion
in 2025.
moreover
, dairy items saw a fluctuation, at the beginning the total amount of money was 6,8
billion
. after 23 years, it increased to 9,9
billion
and fell to 9,5
billion
respectively.
furthermore
, meat products dropped slowly at the moment. in the year 2000, the total export was 6
billion
. after that, it declined to 5,5
billion
and to 5
billion
at the end
of the period.
to draw
Verb problem
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the conclusion, the peak moment of each source was international tourism in 2000 and 2025.
however
, 2023 reached a peak in dairy products a total of
Correct your spelling
nearly
nealy
Correct your spelling
nearly
10
billion
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