the chart below gives information about Southland's main exports in 2000, *20.., and future production for 2025

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the bar chart depicts the data of Southland's export projects in three different periods starting in 2000 to 2023 and a prediction for 2025.

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information has been calibrated in billions.

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, it is clearly seen that international tourism has risen over time.

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, meat products declined. first and foremost, international tourism experienced an increase in three different years.

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, in 2000 exports gained 8

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, and after that kept increasing to nearly 9

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and expecting approximately 9,9

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in 2025.

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, dairy items saw a fluctuation, at the beginning the total amount of money was 6,8

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. after 23 years, it increased to 9,9

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and fell to 9,5

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respectively.

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, meat products dropped slowly at the moment. in the year 2000, the total export was 6

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. after that, it declined to 5,5

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and to 5

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of the period.

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the conclusion, the peak moment of each source was international tourism in 2000 and 2025.

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, 2023 reached a peak in dairy products a total of

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nearly

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Vocabulary: Replace the words billion with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.

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Lexical resource: 6.0

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the chart below gives information about Southland's main exports in 2000, *20.., and future production for 2025

In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this? What can be done about this problem?

spending money on the conservation of wildlife animals is a waste of resources. This money would be better spent on other more important things. Do you agree?

In many large cities, people waste hours of their time every day because of traffic congestion on the road. What are the causes of this, what solution can you suggest

Some people think the government should provide free housing, while others believe it is not the government’s responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Some people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age. Others think they should begin after 7 years of age. Discuss both views and give your own opinion