You are planning a holiday in another country and would like a friend to accompany you. Write a letter to the friend asking him/her to join you and explain: invitation - Why are you taking a holiday? - What is your holiday plan? Explain, simples/ future - Why would you like him/her to go with you?
Dear Malika
How are you? Hope you are having a good time. I am writing to invite you to my journey. I plan to fly to Thailand
this
winter vacation. I would be glad if you would come with me.
This
vacation lasts a couple of weeks. From January 3 to January 17. During this
holiday, we will relax, have delicious meals, go shopping and sunbathe in the sun. We will take some pictures so that we can remember later how great we had a rest.
I invite you because you are my best friend. And I want to fly with you because I know that you adore Thailand. And I think these holidays will be boring without you.
Sincerely Nafisa.Submitted by saydusmonovasomiddin94 on
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coherence cohesion
The letter needs to improve the logical structure by providing clearer and more distinct paragraphs to enhance readability and flow.
coherence cohesion
Include a proper greeting and closing to adhere to the conventions of a personal letter. For example, use 'Dear Malika,' as a greeting and 'Kind regards,' or 'Yours sincerely,' followed by your name for the closing.
coherence cohesion
Organise the letter so that each paragraph contains one clear idea, with an introductory sentence followed by supporting details or explanations.
task achievement
The response could more fully satisfy the task by expanding on each point, specifically providing more detail about why a holiday is being taken and elaborating on the plans for the holiday.
task achievement
Maintain a friendly and inviting tone throughout the letter to make your friend feel more welcome. The tone is currently quite suitable, but small enhancements could make it feel even more personal and heartfelt.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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