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The graph below shows the estimated number of cars manufactured in 4 countries between 2020 and 2035.

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The presented line graph indicates the value of
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 manufactured in China ,
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,
Japan
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 ,
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USA
 over a 15-year period between 2020 and 2035. As is shown by the chart, it is
predictes
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predicted
predicts
 the number of
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cars
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car
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manufactures
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 in China will increase gradually, other country witness
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a decrease
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 .
While
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it is expected
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that
 the data of car manufactures in
japan
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 will
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highest
. The projection reveals that will be
an
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 steady
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 in the figures for
cars
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manufactucred
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manufactured
 in China from 100
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thousands
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thousand
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 in 2020 to 150
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thousands
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thousand
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 in 2035.
On the other hand
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 , it is estimated that the number of
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cars
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car
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manufactures
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manufacturers
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 in
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the Usa
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USA
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 will go
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down
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 substantially from 300
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thousands
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thousand
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 in 2020 to 10
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thousands
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thousand
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 in 2035. In like manner , the data of
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cars
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car
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manufactures
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manufacturers
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 in
UK
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the UK
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 are
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 to decline moderately from 200
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thousands
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thousand
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in2020
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in 2020
 to 40
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thousands
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thousand
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 in 2035. At
last
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 , the indicates that the percentage of
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cars
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car
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manufactertures
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manufacturers
 in
Japan
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 will
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fall slightly from 350
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thousands
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thousand
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 in 2020 to 300
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thousands
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thousand
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 in 2030 .
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During
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During
 the period from 2030 to 2035 in
Japan
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 , it is likely that the ratio of
cars
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manufactucred
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manufactured
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will
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will
 drop significantly

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Vocabulary: Replace the words cars, japan, thousands with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "indicates" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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