Write a letter to your friend who just moved to a new house letting him know about a gift you prepared for him/her a)What was the gift b)Why you chose it c)How it will be delivered
Dear Watson,
How are you? I hope
this
letter brings you good health. I am glad that finally
you have moved into your dream home, and you will be excited also
. To add to this
happiness, I have prepared a beautiful present for you.
I bought a photo frame which has your family picture. I requested the artist draw the picture with the same materials used for Tanjore paintings. It came out well and along with
that I have bought a modern art photo frame to hang on the wall near the staircase.
I chose to buy this
gift because I know that you are fond of paintings. Moreover
, it will help to decorate your home and give a pleasant atmosphere. Also
, it will be memorable because when you see those photos you will remember me.
I will deliver this
gift on Sunday. Since it has glass, I am afraid if I send it through courier service whether it will reach you without any damage. So, I requested my uncle who is travelling to your hometown will deliver the present to your home. Hope you will like my gift.
Look forward to seeing you soon.
Yours lovingly,
FaisalSubmitted by faisalmahamood on
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coherence cohesion
The letter has a good logical structure, but could be improved with clearer transitions and connections between the paragraphs for even better flow.
task achievement
You chose an appropriate tone for an informal letter to a friend. In order to enhance task achievement, consider providing more specific details, which might include a personal anecdote or a description of how you chose the gift.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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