the graph below shows the number of university graduatesin canada from 1992 to 2007

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of university

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in Canada from 1992 to 2007.

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, undergraduate students have increased

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the period. To delve into the details, in 1992, Canadian

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were around 170,000, women were 100,000 and men were 70,000 respectively. After

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, the

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of

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never

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been below

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100,000 and 70,000. In 2006, the sum of

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approximately 250,000.

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to graduate

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somehow decreased between 1998 and 2000, the rates significantly increased after 2002.

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, it is revealed that

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of women who finished university coursework grows more rapidly than that of men.

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, the gap between females and males is widening gradually, from 30,000 to 50,000

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to 1992 and 2006. In sum, it is evident that the

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of people who complete their university degrees

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increasing

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over the decades.

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, the

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of alumna always

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of

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their counterparts.