The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005 (million). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table provided highlights the figure of
visitors
who went for
worldwide travel in four different years .
In general , it can be seen that Europe Change preposition
on
always
Add a missing verb
was always
highest
in others and Asia and Correct article usage
the highest
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the pacific
pacific
Capitalize word
Pacific
was
high Correct subject-verb agreement
were
excepted
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except
the
first year . Another key , Change preposition
in the
Middle
East Correct article usage
the Middle
always
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is always
lowest
in all years .
Looking at the Correct article usage
the lowest
visitor
in Europe and America in Fix the agreement mistake
visitors
further
detail , the figures increased substaintially
. In reference to Correct your spelling
substantially
Europe
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European
visitors
, it started at 280.2 million
in 1990 and exploded to 400.2 million
in the final year making it the highest level of visitor
in all five countries . Regarding Fix the agreement mistake
visitors
to
Asia and Remove the preposition
apply
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the pacific’s
pacific’s
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Pacific’s
visitors
originated at 80.5 million
before increased
to 113.2 Wrong verb form
increasing
million
at the end
of the timeframe. Similarly
, America’
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America’s
visitors
was
lowest with 80.5 Change the verb form
were
million
in the first year .
Moving onto those who went to Middel
East , which had the lowest Correct your spelling
Middle
visitors
over all years . The visitor of Middle East Correct quantifier usage
number of visitors
recorded
at 9.8 Add a missing verb
was recorded
million
in 1990 and more than sixfold by 2005 at 15.8 million
. With regard to Africa , the number of tourists were
in the range of 20 Change the verb form
was
million
excepted
in 1990 the number of Wrong verb form
except
visitors
only
18.2 Add a missing verb
was only
million
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Vocabulary: Replace the words visitors, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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