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The bar chart below shows the average number of visitors who went to six types of attractions in Canberra, on a weekday and on the weekend, in 2019.

The bar chart below shows the average number of visitors who went to six types of attractions in Canberra, on a weekday and on the weekend, in 2019.
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The bar chart illustrates the average
number
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 of
people
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 who went to six different attractions in Canberra per day in 2019.
Overall
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, the figure showed that all
visitors
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were
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mostly spent their time on a
weekend
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 day, with Canberra's cafes and restaurants being the highest
number
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 in 2019.
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, the least
number
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 of
people
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 visiting
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the recreational area was Museums on a weekday.
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 with,
although
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 cafes and Restaurants
was
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 notably the most visited
place
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places
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 on
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weekend
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weekends
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, accounting for 150
visitors
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, their
visitor
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visitors
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 on
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weekend
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weekends
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was
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 similar to
shopping
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the shopping
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center
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centers
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 about 90
visitors
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, which is slightly lower than parks by 10
visitors
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.
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, the total
visitor
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number of visitors
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for
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 remaining attractions, including
museum
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museums
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, movie theaters, and
library
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libraries
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,
were
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 below 80
visitor
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. Compared to libraries,
people
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 were more likely to visit
museum
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museums
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 and movie
theaters
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theatres
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 on a
weekend
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,
about
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 80 and 70
visitors
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, respectively. On a weekday only a small
number
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 of
people
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 visited
museum
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the museum
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 and library, approximately 20
visitors
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, people, visitors, weekend with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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