The bar chart below shows the average number of visitors who went to six types of attractions in Canberra, on a weekday and on the weekend, in 2019.
The bar chart illustrates the average
number
of Use synonyms
people
who went to six different attractions in Canberra per day in 2019.
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Overall
, the figure showed that all Linking Words
visitors
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were
mostly spent their time on a Unnecessary verb
apply
weekend
day, with Canberra's cafes and restaurants being the highest Use synonyms
number
in 2019. Use synonyms
However
, the least Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
people
visiting Use synonyms
to
the recreational area was Museums on a weekday.
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apply
To begin
with, Linking Words
although
cafes and Restaurants Linking Words
was
notably the most visited Correct subject-verb agreement
were
place
on Fix the agreement mistake
places
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weekend
, accounting for 150 Fix the agreement mistake
weekends
visitors
, their Use synonyms
visitor
on Fix the agreement mistake
visitors
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weekend
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weekends
was
similar to Correct subject-verb agreement
were
shopping
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the shopping
center
about 90 Fix the agreement mistake
centers
visitors
, which is slightly lower than parks by 10 Use synonyms
visitors
.
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On the other hand
, the total Linking Words
visitor
Fix the agreement mistake
number of visitors
for
remaining attractions, including Change preposition
to
museum
, movie theaters, and Fix the agreement mistake
museums
library
, Fix the agreement mistake
libraries
were
below 80 Correct subject-verb agreement
was
visitor
. Compared to libraries, Change to a plural noun
visitors
people
were more likely to visit Use synonyms
museum
and movie Fix the agreement mistake
museums
theaters
on a Change the spelling
theatres
weekend
, Use synonyms
about
80 and 70 Change preposition
with about
visitors
, respectively. On a weekday only a small Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
people
visited Use synonyms
museum
and library, approximately 20 Correct article usage
the museum
visitors
.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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