the chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
The column chart illustrates how Australians bought and drank
coffee
and tea in last
4 weeks in five cities, based on the results of a survey.
Correct article usage
the last
Overall
, it is evident that buying fresh coffee
among people
in Australia,
is less popular. Most Remove the comma
apply
city
dwellers went to a café for coffee
or tea and in just one city
, people
mostly bought instant coffee
in comparison with others.
It can be observed from the chart that Australians were less interested in buying fresh coffee
. Most of the city
dwellers who bought fresh coffee
in last
4 weeksCorrect article usage
the last
,
are living in Sydney and the corresponding figure is roughly 43%. Remove the comma
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However
, the percentages of Brisbane and Adelaide residents who are drawn to drinking fresh coffee
, are the lowest at just under 35%.
By contrast
, except people
who live in Adelaide, most Australians Change preposition
for people
went
to a café in order to have a cup of Wrong verb form
go
coffee
or tea. The highest proportion of people
with this
habit,
stood at approximately 63%, and is associated with two cities, Melbourne and Hobart. Interestingly, Adelaide is the only Remove the comma
apply
city
where its residents, nearly 50% of them, preferred to buy instant coffee
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