Fraud has increased tremendously in the society. what are the reasons for this and how can the menace be curtailed?
Recently, the phenomenon of people lying to the public about their identity and life has increased significantly. I emphasized that the reason is to enrich themselves whether with materials or fame.
This
essay will elaborate more on the topic and the solution to overcome such
issues.
To begin
with, the rising of social media usage and the easy benefits such
as money and popularity that individuals achieve from it has led to initial
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For example
, creators lie on the internet about their lives and wealth to show audiences their success and to encourage them to follow the same path and join the paid courses made specifically to generate pennies. This
will lead to people feeling the need to spend money on a course that was never proven to work as intended and will only make the creators richer.
Additionally
, there is a solution that can be implemented by the users of internet
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The essay addresses the overall topic, but the specific focus on reasons for the increase in fraud and detailed strategies for curtailing it were not fully addressed or developed. Refer to the question prompt directly and ensure each point is thoroughly elaborated to fully meet task requirements.
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