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The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019
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The line graphs depict the transformations
owning
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in owning
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 electrical items and durations
on
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of
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 doing
housework
 in a country for 99 years from 1920 to 2019. The data have been calibrated in percentage and
hours
.
Overall
,
percentage
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the percentage
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 of households with electrical goods went up in a decade.
In contrast
, amount of
hours
 of
housework
 per household decreased. First and foremost, vacuum
cleaner
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cleaners
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 and
refrigerator
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refrigerators
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 accounted
up
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for up
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 to 100%,
where
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whereas
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 in 1920 both of
this
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these
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 things started the lowest at 30% and 0%. Meanwhile,
number
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a number
the number
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 of
household
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households
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 that had washing
machine
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machines
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 saw a fluctuation.
Moreover
, in 1920 the percentage of
people
 with laundry
machine
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machines
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 was 40% and continued rising to 70% in 1960 and fell to 63%. after
that
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that,
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 it experienced
increase
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an increase
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 to 72% in 2019, which was the peak.
In addition
,
people
 in 1920 spent approximately 50
hours
 per week
to do
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doing
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housework
such
 as doing laundry, preparing dishes and cleaning.
However
, in the next 20 years, it dropped to 35
hours
 and slightly declined to 11
hours
 every week for
people
 to do
housework
.
To sum up
, in
this
 recent years more and more
people
 tend to
live
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leave
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 the
housework
 behind compared to the past.
on the other hand
, the number of having electric appliances increased.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words housework, hours, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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