The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019
The line graphs depict the transformations
owning
electrical items and durations Change preposition
in owning
on
doing Change preposition
of
housework
in a country for 99 years from 1920 to 2019. The data have been calibrated in percentage and hours
. Overall
, percentage
of households with electrical goods went up in a decade. Correct article usage
the percentage
In contrast
, amount of hours
of housework
per household decreased.
First and foremost, vacuum cleaner
and Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
refrigerator
accounted Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
up
to 100%, Change preposition
for up
where
in 1920 both of Correct word choice
whereas
this
things started the lowest at 30% and 0%. Meanwhile, Correct determiner usage
these
number
of Change the article
a number
the number
household
that had washing Change to a plural noun
households
machine
saw a fluctuation. Fix the agreement mistake
machines
Moreover
, in 1920 the percentage of people
with laundry machine
was 40% and continued rising to 70% in 1960 and fell to 63%. after Fix the agreement mistake
machines
that
it experienced Add a comma
that,
increase
to 72% in 2019, which was the peak.
Add an article
an increase
In addition
, people
in 1920 spent approximately 50 hours
per week to do
Change the verb form
doing
housework
such
as doing laundry, preparing dishes and cleaning. However
, in the next 20 years, it dropped to 35 hours
and slightly declined to 11 hours
every week for people
to do housework
.
To sum up
, in this
recent years more and more people
tend to live
the Correct your spelling
leave
housework
behind compared to the past. on the other hand
, the number of having electric appliances increased.Submitted by syifensaft
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Vocabulary: Replace the words housework, hours, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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