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The graph below shows the amount of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years

The graph below shows the amount of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years
#amount #waste #three #companies #period #years
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The line graph gives information about the tonnage of
waste
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 produced by several companies from 2000 to 2015. In summary, the three companies had different patterns in
term
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 of
waste
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 production. Regarding
to
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company
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 A and
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company
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Company
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 B, they
had
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have
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 decreased their
waste
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 in 15 years. Reversedly,
company
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 C surged substantially. In reference to
company
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 A, the trash
were
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was
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 consistently plummetting from 12
tonnes
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 in 2000 to slightly under 9
tonnes
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 in 2015.
This
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 negative growth
also
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 applied
for
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to
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the
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apply
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company
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 B which had its debris significantly drop from just below 9
tonnes
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 to 3
tonnes
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 within 15 years, despite a spike of far above 9
tonnes
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 by 2005.
Company
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 C,
in contrast
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, had its pattern essentially reversed as the first 2 companies. The
company
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 never had its
waste
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 drop
troughout
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throughout
 the year. The amount kept increasing in significant
tonnes
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,
marks
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marking
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 above 3000 kilograms in 2000 to over 9
tonnes
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 in 2015.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, company, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • waste production
  • company
  • trends
  • significant
  • fluctuations
  • surges
  • reductions
  • correlations
  • environmental policies
  • technological advancements
  • units of measurement
  • time period
  • stability
  • milestones
  • graph analysis
  • pattern recognition
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