The pie chart shows the amount of money a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year, 2016.

The pie chart shows the amount of money a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year, 2016.
The pie charts illustrate the amount of
revenue
and expenditure for a charity for children in the USA in 2016.
Overall
, it is crystal clear that the donated food accounted for the highest source of
revenue
,
while
the program services made up the most significant percentage of expenditure. Total
revenue
outstripped or exceeded total expenses. Getting back to the details of the
revenue
chart, donated food formed almost 86% of the
revenue
;
besides
, the second-highest income, community contributions, accounted for nearly 10% of the
revenue
. As for the lowest
revenue
, government grants and investment income made up 0.4
percent
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of the
revenue
together. As the second pie chart suggests, most expenditures came from program services, which were almost 95%. The other two minor expenses were fundraising and management, which formed 2.6 and 1.6%, respectively. As to the total amount of income and expenses, approximately 53.5 and 53.2 accounted for children's charities, respectively.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • donations
  • grants
  • fundraising events
  • expenditure
  • administration costs
  • program expenses
  • direct benefits
  • indirect benefits
  • underprivileged children
  • education
  • healthcare
  • shelter
  • nourishment
  • medical treatments
  • basic needs
  • financial sustainability
  • transparency
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