Many people believe that scientific research should be carried out and controlled by governments rather than private companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many high-education people do not agree about scientific
research
being done by our government
rather than an individual company with many people saying the government
can do it better. The writer of the essay completely disagrees with the school of thought and shall seriously explain the motives of this
ill action.
On the one hand, individually financed scientific research
has done a lot
for innovation because they are freer to do whatever they want and they want to spend their money
on good actions. Those who do research
for companies are free to think of whatever want and let their imagination go crazy. If the governments
do not believe them, they cannot do the research
, and therefore
, lose their money
to other people. In addition
, companies should be in charge of scientific research
because of freedom for the scientists who are doing good for society.
To the best of my recollection, it is advantageous if governments
do scientific research
because they can have a lot
of money
. Private companies can do wrong the research
because they can change it to make a lot
of money
to give in to their greed. On the opposite, governments
conduct research
to find more solutions to problems such
as poverty, global warming, diseases and women’s rights. Others such
as computer machines, human rights and animal rights. For example
, the government
’s railway system was chosen because there were fewer accidents on it than the private company’s. This
shows that governments
are better at scientific research
.
In conclusion, private research
can innovate a lot
, but government
research
is meant to be the better option. Scientists will be able to pay more attention to government
research
and they can become heroes to save the nation.Submitted by writingeilts on
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task achievement
Provide clearer support for your arguments with more specific examples.
coherence cohesion
Improve the logical structure by clearly distinguishing between arguments in favor of government control and those against it.
task achievement
The essay presents both sides of the argument, which adds depth to the discussion.
coherence cohesion
A clear introduction and conclusion are present, which helps to frame the essay.
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