You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events' organiser. Write a letter to the Training Organiser. In your letter • expressing your interest in the role • requesting more information about it • explaining what experience you have

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Dear Sir/Madam I am writing to apply for the social event's organizer which you need some participants to be. I have been working in public relations for 10 years.

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, I am very interested in playing a role as a speaker.

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my work which I have done for a long time, I really enjoyed talking to people and persuading them to attend the events. I would like to ask you for additional information in order to give me more understanding of my role. Especially, I was wondering if you could provide me with the aspects of people who will join

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program,

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includes the data involving numbers, sex, age and so on. As I mentioned in the above paragraph, I have plenty of experience with building good interaction by talking to people. Following my background, I am quite sure that I can perform my duty and bring more benefits to your events. I hope you will take my letter into consideration, and I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Victor

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coherence cohesion

Ensure each paragraph presents a single, clear idea to strengthen paragraph structure.

coherence cohesion

The logical flow between paragraphs could be improved with better use of cohesive devices.

task achievement

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task achievement

While the tone is mostly suitable, a more formal sign-off would be appropriate for this context.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

175 words

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