The graph below shows the amount of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years
The line graph illustrates
tonnes
of waste
produced by three companies named A,B
, and C
between Change the article
the year
year
2000 to 2015.
Fix the agreement mistake
years
Overall
, company
C
experienced an upward trend while
A and B
experienced a downward trend over the given period
. Furthermore
, at the end
of the give
time Change the form of the verb
given
period
the highest amount of waste
produced
by Add a missing verb
was produced
company
C
and the lowest reported
by Add a missing verb
was reported
company
B
.
In 2000, company
Capitalize word
Company
C
disposed around
4 Change preposition
of around
tonnes
of waste
as the least among all but, over the next decade it rose gradually to about 7 tonnes
. However
, after 2010, it outraced the
Correct article usage
apply
company
B
and C
respectively and reached its peak of approximately 10 tonnes
of waste
.
At the beginning of the period
, company
A was the lowest waste
producer and it was around 12 tonnes
. The figure started to decline rapidly from the beginning, and reached its the
lowest point of about 8 Correct article usage
apply
tonnes
in 2015. In 2000 company
Capitalize word
Company
C
started to release around 8 tonnes
of waste
and in the following 5 years
it experienced significant growth to about 10 Add a comma
years,
tonnes
. Then
from 2005 to 2015 it showed sharp
fall and hit Correct article usage
a sharp
the
lowest point Change the word
its
about
3 Change preposition
of about
tonnes
, became
the least Wrong verb form
becoming
waste
produced for the rest of the period
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tonnes, waste, b, c, company, period with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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