The map below shows two potential locations for a shopping mall in the city of Brandfield. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram below illustrates the two options
of
the Change preposition
for
area
of future development for a shopping centre in the
Brandfield. Correct article usage
apply
Overall
, the mall will be placed in the north near from housing estate or in the southeast area
of the town near from
the industrial estate.
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apply
Firstly
, looking at the details of the map gives information that the first choice of location can be reached by train or other vehiches
. Not only near Correct your spelling
vehicles
vehicle
from
the housing Change preposition
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area
, the site can also
be accessed from City
Centre and Golf Course and park. Correct article usage
the City
At
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On
he
east side of the place, there is a river.
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the
Secondly
, the S2 or the second site is not only near from
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to
Correct article usage
the industial
industial
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industrial
area
but also
from
the city centre. In the same way, Change preposition
to
this
location is passed by rail tracks and road
which can be reached by railway or others. Fix the agreement mistake
roads
This
site is also
near from T-junction which connect
people from the east and north.Change the verb form
connects
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words area with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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