The diagrams below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year

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The two diagrams depict a map of an

airport

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before and after the refurbishment of next

year

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Overall

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,It is explicit that most of the changes will happen in the arrival

section

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of the site and the number of

gates

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will

also

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increase after next

year

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's renovation. In detail,now plan of

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the

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airport

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looks simple with no facility in the arrival part of the site,but after redevelopment in the coming

year

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,three amenities will be provided in the arrival

section

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after renovation in the next

year

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.These facilities are a cafe,an ATM machine and the car hire.There are two amenities now in the departures of the

airport

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,that are a check-in counter and a cafe.

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,a bag drop

section

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will be constructed in departure in the coming

year

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According to

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the current plan of

site

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the site

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,no shop is present in either

section

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neither

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the departure nor

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the arrival.The shop will be present after renovation in the departures of the

airport

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. Eight

gates

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are available to use in the present map.The number of

gates

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will increase to eighteen after refurbishment.Now people walk between the

gates

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,but in the coming days after redevelopment there will be a train for the public.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words airport, year, section, gates with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

195 words

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The diagrams below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year

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Some people think that radio is the best way to get the news while others think that television is better for this purpose.

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Long distant flights uses more fuel than cars and brings pollution to the environment. We should discourage non-essential flight rather than limit the use of cars. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehical will be passenger. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?