The diagrams below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year

The diagrams below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year
The two diagrams depict a map of an
airport
before and after the refurbishment of next
year
.
Overall
,It is explicit that most of the changes will happen in the arrival
section
of the site and the number of
gates
will
also
increase after next
year
's renovation. In detail,now plan of
an
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airport
looks simple with no facility in the arrival part of the site,but after redevelopment in the coming
year
,three amenities will be provided in the arrival
section
after renovation in the next
year
.These facilities are a cafe,an ATM machine and the car hire.There are two amenities now in the departures of the
airport
,that are a check-in counter and a cafe.
On the other hand
,a bag drop
section
will be constructed in departure in the coming
year
.
According to
the current plan of
site
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,no shop is present in either
section
neither
in
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the departure nor
in
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the arrival.The shop will be present after renovation in the departures of the
airport
. Eight
gates
are available to use in the present map.The number of
gates
will increase to eighteen after refurbishment.Now people walk between the
gates
,but in the coming days after redevelopment there will be a train for the public.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words airport, year, section, gates with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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