The chart below shows the top ten countries with the highest spending on travel in 2014

The chart below shows the top ten countries with the highest spending on travel in 2014
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The bar chart depicts the ten highest
countries
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spending on trips in 2014. It is clear from the chart that China is the top one spending on travel.
In addition
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, Taiwan ranks the tenth country. China, the United States, Germany, the United Kingdom and Singapore all of these
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spend more than 20
billion
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dollars
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.
However
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, China has the highest spending with more than 100n
billion
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dollars
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. The United States and Germany remain the same number more than 80
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dollars
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. United Kingdom achieved the 4th highest spending with below 60
billion
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dollars
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which is lower than The United States and Germany by more than 20
billion
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. Singapore is the 5th country with below 40
billion
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.
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, South Korea, Hong Kong, India, Malaysia and Taiwan, these
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spend less than 20
billion
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dollars
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. South Korea and Hong Kong achieved the 6th and 7th, spending the same amount of 20
billion
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dollars
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. India spent more than Malaysia. Taiwan spent the lowest in the top ten
countries
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, billion, dollars with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Expenditure
  • Destinations
  • Global economy
  • Tourist influx
  • Consumption patterns
  • Luxury travel
  • Budget tourism
  • Outbound tourism
  • Disposable income
  • Exchange rates
  • Tourism sector
  • Hospitality industry
  • Inbound tourism
  • Travel advisories
  • Infrastructure
  • Revenue generation
  • Cultural heritage
  • Leisure activities
  • Global events
  • Tourist demographics
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