The bar chart below shows the estimated sales of jeans for two companies next year in Turkey. The pie chart shows the projected market share of the two companies in jeans at the end of next year. Write a short report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The bar
chart
illustrates the estimated sales
of jeans
next year
and the pie chart
gives information about the projected market
share
at the end
of next year
for two companies in jeans
in Turkey.
Overall
, the sales
of jeans
by Jack & Jones
Co
. were higher than Mango
Co
. in the next year
. In addition
, the projected market
share
of Jack & Jones
Co
. in jeans
is also
higher than Mango
Co
. at the end
of next year
.
A deep analysis of the bar chart
provided reveals in January of the next year
the sales
of jeans
by Jack & Jones
Co
. were higher than Mango
Co
. (about 450 thousand
pairs
and about 150 thousand
pairs
respectively). Besides
, estimated the sales
of jeans
by Jack & Jones
Co
. increase from about 250 thousand
pairs
in February to 900 thousand
pairs
in December of next year
. In contrast
, in only 2 months the sales
of jeans
by Mango
Co
. were higher than Jack & Jones
Co
. are July and August.
It is noticeable in the pie chart
that the projected market
share
in jeans
of both Jack & Jones
Co
. and Mango
Co
. have a proportion of 50% of the market
share
in jeans
of Turkey. Meanwhile, the market
share
in jeans
of Jack & Jones
Co
. is higher than Mango
Co
. (about 30% and 20% respectively).Submitted by yeshomeclass on
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 80%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words chart, sales, jeans, year, market, share, jones, co, mango, thousand, pairs with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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