The charts show the main methodof transport of people travelling to one university in 2004 and 2009

The charts show the main methodof transport of people travelling to one university in 2004 and 2009
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The pie charts provide information about public transportation that was commonly used to travel by students to a university between 2004 and 2009.
Overall
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, people witnessed travelling by bus and car compared to the other transport. Meanwhile, people had the least interest in travelling by using trains and walking.
To begin
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with, the utilization of cars experienced the highest demand in 2004 but dropped by 23% in 2009
due to
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car parking charges at the university in 2006.
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, bus usage had a rapid growth because there was a new bus stop at the university in 2008, accounting for 33% in 2004 and increased significantly to 46% in 2009. Bicycles
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showed an upward trend with approximately 9% in 2004 to 16% in the
last
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period.
Although
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walking was the cheapest physical activity, it became one of disliked methods to travel in both years, roughly 4% in 2004 and 6% in 2009.
Furthermore
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, train accounted for 3% in 2004 and 4% in 2009 which remained the least preferred mode of transportation in both periods.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • method of transport
  • comparison
  • increase
  • decrease
  • cars
  • bicycles
  • walking
  • public transport
  • popular choice
  • reasons
  • changes
  • infrastructure improvements
  • impact
  • transport choices
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