The charts show the main methodof transport of people travelling to one university in 2004 and 2009
The two pie charts illustrate the percentages of the five major ways of
transportation
, Use synonyms
such
as cars, walking, Linking Words
buses
, trains and bicycles that were used by people to reach their university in the years between 2004 and 2009.
It is clear from the charts that the most Use synonyms
transportation
methods used are vehicles and Use synonyms
buses
in both years.
There was a noticeable difference in car usage in 2004 when the percentage was almost more than half in comparison to the year 2009 which was around 30%. Use synonyms
This
sudden decrease was Linking Words
due to
the car parking charges which had started in 2006. A closer examination of the figures for the Linking Words
students
who actually were using Use synonyms
buses
as a Use synonyms
transportation
method to their school revealed the greatest proportion in 2009, which was nearly 5 Use synonyms
students
in every 10 using Use synonyms
this
method. Linking Words
On the other hand
, in 2004, Linking Words
students
were using Use synonyms
buses
Use synonyms
lesser
than cars about 3 Correct word choice
less
students
in every 10. Use synonyms
This
happened Linking Words
due to
the new bus stop station that had been constructed in 2008. Linking Words
Moreover
, bicycle usage rose approximately twice from 2004 to 2009.
The rest of the mentioned Linking Words
transportation
ways, Use synonyms
such
as train and walking, remained in about constant proportions, which was around 4% and 6% respectively.
These plots show that people were using Linking Words
buses
more than automobiles in 2009. Use synonyms
This
emphasises how public Linking Words
transportation
had more added value than cars in the past years.Use synonyms
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