the chart below shows the changes that took place in 3 different areas of crime in Newport city centre from 2003 - 2012 summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

the chart below shows the changes that took place in 3 different areas of crime in Newport city centre from 2003 - 2012 summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates how many burglaries, car thefts and robberies
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occurred in Newport city centre between 2003 and 2012.
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, burglaries saw the most drastic decrease over the
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of ten years
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robberies remained relatively stable throughout the
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. Car thefts,
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,
demonstated
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demonstrated
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a fluctuation and
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decreased slowly. The number of burglaries was just below 3500 incidents at the beginning and
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value slightly rose to around 3750 before falling drastically to about 1200 over the next four years.
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figure fluctuated between roughly 1200 and 1500 incidents from 2008 to 2012. Car thefts stayed relatively stable at around 2750 over two years before fluctuating between
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level and just over 2000 between 2005 and 2008.
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it grew to just over 2500 before declining to about 2400 incidents
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. The number of robberies hovered between roughly 500 and around 900 throughout the entire
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Vocabulary: Replace the words period with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
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