Write a letter to friend to inform them of a celebration you are having for a recent job promotion. Include information about The promotion The celebration Their accommodation
Dear Tim,
I hope
this
letter finds you in radiant health and you are doing well. I am writing this
letter regarding a celebration program
for a recent job promotion which I got at the current company.
As you know, I have been working in a multinational organization as a human resources manager since 2020. From the very beginning, I have been trying to give my level best to accomplish the tasks on time. As a result
, my overall
performance has been assessed, and I have been promoted to Senior Manager of the human resources department.
I am over the moon to get this
promotion which will help me a lot to achieve my career goals. This
is because I have decided to celebrate this
achievement with all my friends. You are cordially invited to this
celebration program
which will be held on the 5th of January, 2024, at The Peninsula Restaurant in the evening.
Moreover
, I would like to request you to attend this
program
at least two days in advance so that you can explore the cultural diversity of this
city apart from the celebration of this
promotion program
. I have already arranged the required accommodation for you to stay at my apartment.
All the best,
FaisalSubmitted by faisalmahamood on
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greeting and closing
Ensure a warm, friendly greeting rather than a formal opening for a letter to a friend.
logical structure
While the overall structure is logical, improve paragraphing by dedicating a separate paragraph to each main topic.
single idea per paragraph
Avoid combining the invitation and accommodation details in one paragraph. Dedicate one paragraph to describe the celebration and another to provide accommodation details.
suitable writing tone
The letter is slightly formal. Try to use a more informal and personal tone when writing to a friend.
complete response
You have addressed all the bullet points, but you can enhance task achievement by adding more personal and specific details about the celebration and your friendship.