The charts show the sources of electricity produced in 4 countries between 2003 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
These pie charts illustrate how 4 countries generated
electricity
from 3 resources over 5 years.
Overall
,while
the majority of energy used to produce electricity
in India
and Vietnam were
fossil fuels, the opposite could be seen in Morocco and Correct subject-verb agreement
was
Sweden
. It was noticeable that nuclear was only appeared in India
and Sweden
.
Accounting for 82%, the production of power
from fossil fuels was dominant in India
and minor in Sweden
, at 4%. In contrast
, renewable energy in India
was less than one-fourth compared to Sweden
which made up 4%. Electricity
generated by nuclear power
in India
was the lowest at 4% which was 90% less than Sweden
. Change preposition
in Sweden
Similarly
, hydraulic power
took up 14% of electricity
production in India
and added up to/ comprised / consisted of 25% of Sweden
’s production, at 52%. It was noticeable that hydraulic power
contributed to most of the electricity
in Sweden
.
On the other hand
, in Morocco, there was a difference of 90% /a 90% difference between the percentage of hydro
Correct your spelling
hydropower
power
and fossil fuels. Meanwhile, Vietnam saw a minimal difference between the 2 types which was less than 10%. Strikingly, nuclear power
was not used in these nations.Submitted by cathyngo1512 on
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, india, sweden, power with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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