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The charts show the sources of electricity produced in 4 countries between 2003 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts show the sources of electricity produced in 4 countries between 2003 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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These pie charts illustrate how 4 countries generated
electricity
 from 3 resources over 5 years.
Overall
,
while
 the majority of energy used to produce
electricity
 in
India
 and Vietnam
were
Correct subject-verb agreement
was
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 fossil fuels, the opposite could be seen in Morocco and
Sweden
. It was noticeable that nuclear was only appeared in
India
 and
Sweden
. Accounting for 82%, the production of
power
 from fossil fuels was dominant in
India
 and minor in
Sweden
, at 4%.
In contrast
, renewable energy in
India
 was less than one-fourth compared to
Sweden
 which made up 4%.
Electricity
 generated by nuclear
power
 in
India
 was the lowest at 4% which was 90% less than
Sweden
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in Sweden
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.
Similarly
, hydraulic
power
 took up 14% of
electricity
 production in
India
 and added up to/ comprised / consisted of 25% of
Sweden
’s production, at 52%. It was noticeable that hydraulic
power
 contributed to most of the
electricity
 in
Sweden
.
On the other hand
, in Morocco, there was a difference of 90% /a 90% difference between the percentage of
hydro
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hydropower
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power
 and fossil fuels. Meanwhile, Vietnam saw a minimal difference between the 2 types which was less than 10%. Strikingly, nuclear
power
 was not used in these nations.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, india, sweden, power with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Electricity generation
  • Energy sources
  • Coal-powered
  • Natural gas
  • Nuclear energy
  • Hydroelectric power
  • Renewable resources
  • Energy mix
  • Clean energy
  • Sustainable practices
  • Trend analysis
  • Environmental impact
  • Energy transition
  • Significant increase/decrease
  • Energy reliance
  • Energy portfolio
  • Year-over-year comparison
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