Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later. Some say that these are the best people to talk to school students about the dangers of committing a crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In
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day and age, it is a common belief that some criminals get out of prison and become good citizens so they are the best candidates to talk to teenagers about crime. Linking Words
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better ways to educate juveniles about crime. I will shed light on my opinion in the following essay.
On the one hand, Students can be aware of the consequences of participating in conversations with former Linking Words
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, Stories about the lives of prisoners will easily attract students. These people serve as real-life examples of breaking the law, which helps raise awareness and helps young people comply with the law. Linking Words
In addition
, speeches by exemplary prisoners are Linking Words
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broadcast on television to help students easily access and avoid violating unnecessary laws.
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to follow, because every family should know how to educate their Use synonyms
children
at a young age about social evils and how to prevent them.It has been recognized that the family environment greatly affects the development of Use synonyms
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, most crimes today are Use synonyms
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living in families with broken parents and they are not educated when they are young. Linking Words
Furthermore
, Teachers at school should educate Linking Words
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about morality and actively create a healthy environment for Use synonyms
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To sum up
, speeches by prisoners are very effective, but they are not the only way to educate Linking Words
children
about crime.Use synonyms
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