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The graph below shows the annual visitor spend for visitors to New Zealand from 5 countries for the years 1996 - 2014

The graph below shows the annual visitor spend for visitors to New Zealand from 5 countries for the years 1996 - 2014
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The line chart illustrates how much Australians, British,Japanese and Chinese spent
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the amount
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 of
money
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 in
NZ
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dollars
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while
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 visiting New
Zealand
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 between the
years
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from
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1996 to 2014. It is clear from the graph that there were
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fluctuations
 in the quantity of
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 spent among visitors from the five countries
by
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 the ten mentioned
years
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. These places were
in
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upwards and downwards in different
years
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. A closer examination of the figures for the Australians who actually revealed the greatest dedication of their
money
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 on travel to New
Zealand
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 through the mentioned
years
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. Especially, they had the largest proportion of
money
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 in 2006, which was almost 2,500
NZ
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dollars
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.
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, they reached around 2,000
NZ
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dollars
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 in 2014.
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,the Chinese had the lowest rates of spending their
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in
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 activities when they visited New
Zealand
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 about 500
NZ
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dollars
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 in 2014.
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,in 2004, Americans
had
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spent less than the Chinese about 100
NZ
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dollars
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.
This
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 chart shows that New
Zealand
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 had a large investment from a tourism perspective
due to
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high
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the high
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 amounts of
money
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 received from these five mentioned visitors.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words money, nz, dollars, zealand, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • annual expenditure
  • tourism revenue
  • spending trends
  • economic impact
  • visitor spend
  • tourism sector
  • peak spending
  • fluctuations
  • incline/decline in spending
  • monetary contribution
  • tourist demographics
  • economic conditions
  • tourism campaigns
  • statistical analysis
  • data interpretation
  • fiscal year
  • extrapolate data
  • spending patterns
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