The maps underneath describes the changes that have taken place in and around Queen Mary Hospital since its building in 1960 till 2000
The maps above
displays
information about the changes that have taken place in and around Queen Mary Hospital in 1960, 1980, and 2000.
In detail, there Change the noun form
display
are
four Wrong verb form
were
buildings
in 1960, which are shopping
Correct article usage
the shopping
centre
in
up left, Change preposition
on
hospital
Correct article usage
the hospital
in
up right, Change preposition
on
farmland
Correct article usage
the farmland
in
down left, and Change preposition
on
car
park Correct article usage
the car
in
down right, Change preposition
on
then
; in 1980, the shopping centre
and farmland was
removed and added three new places, which was cancer Change the verb form
were
centre
and pharmacy side to side, and nursing school below as big as the farmland before. Furthermore
, the changes that happened in 2000 was
the sizes of the Correct subject-verb agreement
were
buildings
, such
as size
of Add an article
the size
cancer
Correct article usage
the cancer
centre
became bigger, and also
nursing
school and car park became smaller than before.
Correct article usage
the nursing
Overall
, the changes that happened was
between Correct subject-verb agreement
were
size
of the Add an article
the size
buildings
and number of the places. In total, the number of the
Correct article usage
apply
buildings
was
increased from four properties in 1960 Unnecessary verb
apply
into
five properties in 2000.Change preposition
to
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