The chart below shows the type of transport young people in four countries prefer to use.
The bar chart gives us information about adolescents' preferences in the use of vehicles in Great Britain, The USA, Germany, and
France
. Overall
, the car
is the top choice among the others, while
motorcycles mostly being the least.
The rank of the usages of some transports mentioned in both Great Britain and France
are the same, which says car
as the highest, followed by bikes, and lastly
is a motorcycle. However
, there are several differences in those countries, while
the usage of cars in France
is reaching almost 80%, the English are only hit around 60%. However
, the percentage of bicycle users in the UK is more than half of France
.
Not only in those two countries where most of the people are choosing a car
to go places,
the teenagers in the USA Add the word(s)
, but
also
picked the same choice, it can be seen from the rates that said approximately 60%. 40% of the young in the USA are still considered motorcycle and bike, which are indicated by the rates at 30% and 10% respectively. In comparison, young people in Germany rather ride their bikes instead
of their car
, as a result
, the percentage is only 5% apart, while
the motorcycle is the lowest option.Submitted by talithanakhwah19 on
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