The chart below shows the type of transport young people in four countries prefer to use.
The bar chart gives us information about adolescents' preferences in the use of vehicles in Great Britain, The USA, Germany, and
France
. Use synonyms
Overall
, the Linking Words
car
is the top choice among the others, Use synonyms
while
motorcycles mostly being the least.
The rank of the usages of some transports mentioned in both Great Britain and Linking Words
France
are the same, which says Use synonyms
car
as the highest, followed by bikes, and Use synonyms
lastly
is a motorcycle. Linking Words
However
, there are several differences in those countries, Linking Words
while
the usage of cars in Linking Words
France
is reaching almost 80%, the English are only hit around 60%. Use synonyms
However
, the percentage of bicycle users in the UK is more than half of Linking Words
France
.
Not only in those two countries where most of the people are choosing a Use synonyms
car
to go placesUse synonyms
,
the teenagers in the USA Add the word(s)
, but
also
picked the same choice, it can be seen from the rates that said approximately 60%. 40% of the young in the USA are still considered motorcycle and bike, which are indicated by the rates at 30% and 10% respectively. In comparison, young people in Germany rather ride their bikes Linking Words
instead
of their Linking Words
car
, Use synonyms
as a result
, the percentage is only 5% apart, Linking Words
while
the motorcycle is the lowest option.Linking Words
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words france, car with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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