The charts below compare the age structure of the populations of France and India in 1984.

The charts below compare the age structure of the populations of France and India in 

1984.
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the population of France and India the percentage of each gender and each age group. It is clear from the chart that India has a much younger population than France.
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shows that in France males individually die much earlier than females. India is composed of approximately 26% of children between 0 and 10
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old, which is around 13 times more than the other
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of the country. From 50
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old, we can obviously observe a trend in the rates of French males and females. Indeed, the ratio of both ranging from 50
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old to 75 is about 1.5 women per man; the number even dropped drastically to 3 for people aged over 75
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • charts
  • age structure
  • populations
  • France
  • India
  • 1984
  • overall
  • different
  • evenly distributed
  • proportion
  • young people
  • elderly individuals
  • largest age group
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