The charts below compare the age structure of the populations of France and India in 1984.

The pyramid depicts the percentage of males and females in different age groups in 1984 in these countries , France and India.

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, there is a general decrease of people in both countries.

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, we can see a big downturn in people in India , having a high total of males and females, more than 7 , when they are 0 to 5 years old.

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number plummets to 1 when they are 65 to 70.

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, in France, there is

also

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a drop , but it is more level than the other

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The highest fall was for the 40 to 45 age group in the European country for males , and for the Asian, it was for the 20 to 25 age group. France is more constant than the other because of its low birth rate , and its population recovers slowly. The Asian country has a high birth rate and a higher death rate. The European nation is more stable than the Asian country

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its population augmentation being more balanced. India's pyramid shows rapid growth , which means that the population faces more difficulties.

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Jan 3, 2024

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