The charts below compare the age structure of the populations of France and India in 1984.
It is interesting to see how the age and gender structures are built in two completely different countries and cultures as are France and India showing the demographic aspects of each one
as well as
how both societies are composed in 1984.
These statistics might seem contradictory Linking Words
due to
population size in both scenarios, Linking Words
nevertheless
, it is important to highlight the fact that at Linking Words
this
period, India is an underdeveloped Linking Words
country
possessing a low life expectancy and France is going through one of its brightest eras.
On one hand, the European Use synonyms
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has a well-distributed age structure which takes into account genders. On the chart, it exhibits more like a rectangular shape with a slight reduction towards the older ones. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, the age and gender of the Asian Linking Words
country
's distribution is more irregular, with a well-developed birth rate and a strong emphasis on younger generations. The following chart is built with a pyramidal sharped edged form.
The Asian Use synonyms
country
has a symmetrical buildout in terms of gender, with approximately equal sides between women and men Use synonyms
along with
the European Linking Words
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country
. France’s life expectancy is more or less 15 years bigger. Despite Fix the agreement mistake
countries
this
latter fact, India’s birth rate and young population are 3% bigger than France's.Linking Words
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