The charts presented here contrast the percentage of French with the one of
Indians
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according to
sex and age in 1984.
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Overall
, we can observe that the population in India, especially among young people, was very large. But the number of Linking Words
Indians
decreases considerably when they get old. Use synonyms
By contrast
, in France the number of inhabitants was less important, Linking Words
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however
they lived longer.
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however,
First,
in the Asian country, the young population of males and females is larger than in France. As we can see, in the first chart, between 0 and 15, the bracket is about 3 and 4. Linking Words
While
in the other chart, in the same period, the percentage is about 6 and 7. After that, it evens out because in the two diagrams we can distinguish that at 40 and 45 Linking Words
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, the bracket is 3.
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Nevertheless
, Linking Words
French
live longer than Correct article usage
the French
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Indians
. After 45, the rate of Correct article usage
the Indians
Indians
fell a lot. It began at 3 % and it dropped to 1% Use synonyms
for
70. It is the same case for inhabitants of the European country but the population has decreased less. It began with Change preposition
at
also
3% but it dropped to only 2%. Linking Words
Moreover
, we have data for 85 for French and we don’t have more brackets after 70 for Linking Words
Indians
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