The bar chart below shows the total number of Olympic medals won by twelve different countries.
The chart gives information about the amount of awards during the
olympics
games of 12 countries.
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Olympic
Olympics
Overall
, the USA has more than 1000 total medals being the first country with a difference. By contrast
, the other 11 countries all have less than 1000 total awards and are pretty equivalent except 3 of them that
have a few more.
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Firstly
, we can see that the North American country has around 2,300 medals. In short, there is a big difference because it is the only one able to reach more than 1,000. For instance
, China being the country of
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less
awards has 6 times less than the USA.
Looking at the information in detail, it is possible to identify how tied for prizes the 12 states, excluding the USA, are. In fact, Change the quantifier
fewer
in
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the Soviet Union, the United Kingdom and France. Below those, all the nations have almost the same number of medals with no more than 500.Correct subject-verb agreement
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