The bar chart below shows the total number of Olympic medals won by twelve different countries.

The bar chart below shows the total number of Olympic medals won by twelve 

different countries.
The chart illustrates the full amount of Olympic medals triumphed by twelve different regions.
Overall
, the nation which has won the most medals in each type and in general is the USA.
Consequently
, China is the region with the fewest medals accomplished of the twelve countries. The United States of America has won a little over 2,250 Olympic badges. Among the honours, a few less than a thousand gold awards were achieved.
Therefore
, the USA has five times more first places than China.
In addition
, more than 500 silver prizes and over 500 bronze awards were awarded to
this
nation. China,
however
, has not even 500 Olympic badges in its entire history.
This
means that the Asian country has less than a fifth of honours compared to the American country.
Furthermore
, the Asian territory has a little over 200 gold badges and just over 100 silver honours
along with
fewer than 100 bronze awards.
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