You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The table gives us information about the manufacturers of
milk
in the
Netherlands
, Australia,
Tanzania
, and
Guatemala
, commencing 1990 to 2010.
Overall
, the
Netherlands
was the highest contributor in the
milk
factories sector throughout the periods of time, compared to
Guatemala
. From the data, two of the highest
milk
production countries are the
Netherlands
and Australia, both experienced their biggest numbers which were around 11,500,000
litres
of
milk
. Before
reached
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reaching
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its peak, the
Netherlands
had a fluctuation in its trend, starting with 11,262,000 bottles of cream,
subsequently
had
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having
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a slight decrease 10 years later, resulting in about a hundred thousand
litres
of loss. In comparison, Australia has
receding
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in its trend
at the end
of the period, hitting approximately 9,200 thousand
milk
.
On the other hand
, the
Tanzania
and
Guatemala
milk
productions remained steady growth. Despite
this
, there were several interesting trends within both countries. In 1990, the
milk
manufacturers in
Tanzania
tripled
Guatemala
's before doubling it again a decade later, reaching around 1,42,000 and 55,000 respectively. In 2010, the
Tanzania
milk
factories added only about 10k
litres
,
while
Guatemala
climbed just over 80k
litres
of
milk
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words milk, netherlands, tanzania, guatemala, litres with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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