The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table gives us information about the manufacturers of
milk
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in the
Netherlands
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, Australia,
Tanzania
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, and
Guatemala
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, commencing 1990 to 2010.
Overall
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, the
Netherlands
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was the highest contributor in the
milk
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factories sector throughout the periods of time, compared to
Guatemala
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. From the data, two of the highest
milk
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production countries are the
Netherlands
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and Australia, both experienced their biggest numbers which were around 11,500,000
litres
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of
milk
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. Before
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its peak, the
Netherlands
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had a fluctuation in its trend, starting with 11,262,000 bottles of cream,
subsequently
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had
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a slight decrease 10 years later, resulting in about a hundred thousand
litres
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of loss. In comparison, Australia has
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in its trend
at the end
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of the period, hitting approximately 9,200 thousand
milk
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.
On the other hand
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, the
Tanzania
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and
Guatemala
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milk
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productions remained steady growth. Despite
this
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, there were several interesting trends within both countries. In 1990, the
milk
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manufacturers in
Tanzania
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tripled
Guatemala
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's before doubling it again a decade later, reaching around 1,42,000 and 55,000 respectively. In 2010, the
Tanzania
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milk
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factories added only about 10k
litres
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,
while
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Guatemala
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climbed just over 80k
litres
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of
milk
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words milk, netherlands, tanzania, guatemala, litres with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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