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The chart below shows gives information about Southland’s main exports in 2000,*20.., and future projections for 2025. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows gives information about Southland’s main exports in 2000,*20.., and future projections for 2025. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.
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The chart shows
number
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 of main exports of southland in three types of time 2000, 20.. (current year) and
also
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 prediction in 2025. It include: international tourism, daily
products
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 and meal
products
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.
According to
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 the chart, we can see that
number
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 of international tourism has been the most than each others.
Next,
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second highest
number
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 is about daily
products
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. And the
last
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 one scored the lowest
number
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. To
number
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 of international tourism, it predicts that 2025 will get the highest score of
number
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 because it going to nearly 10
billion
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then
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 the second high is to 20s with 9
billion
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 and in 2000 was the lowest just little than 8
billion
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.
Next,
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to the daily
products
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, highest for 20...s with 10
billion
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products
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 and no less more for 2025 in future which will be scored 9
billion
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 and a half. Daily
products
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 lowest's score still in 2000 for only 7
billion
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 of
products
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. And the final main export: meat
products
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 lowest score of all, which has the best year of
number
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 is 6
billion
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 and a half and the prediction of decreasing in 2025 for only 5
billion
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 of meat
products
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 have consumed.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "next, ".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, products, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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