the two maps below show an island, before and after the constuction of some tourist facilities

the two maps below show an island, before and after the constuction of some tourist facilities
The two maps provide information about the change of an
island
after some tourist
facilities
. The length of
this
island
is above 200 meters.
Overall
, there are no
facilities
built on the
island
previously. After that, four
facilities
were built there, namely
restaurant
Correct article usage
a restaurant
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,
reception
,
pier
and accommodation. It is observed that in the first map, there is no building and only some trees on the
island
before many
facilities
are built. There is a beach in the north of the place and surrounded by sea. In the second map, after
facilities
are built, there is a
pier
shaped like the letter T in the south of the
island
. The first building that people can go to after arriving at the
pier
is the
reception
that
Correct pronoun usage
which
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is located in the
center
Change the spelling
centre
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of the
island
surrounded by a vehicle track. In the north of the
reception
building is a restaurant adjoining the coast. From the
pier
until
Change preposition
to
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the restaurant, people can go using the vehicle track. In the east and west of the
reception
area are fifteen hotels connected by footpaths.
In
Change preposition
On
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the west of
this
island
is a swimming area.
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