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The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in New Port city center from 2003-2012.

The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in New Port city center from 2003-2012.
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The line graph illustrates the percentage of
car
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 ownership in the years 1971-2007. The information is categorized into 4 groups: people having one
car
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 two
cars
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, three or more
cars
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 and no
car
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 at all.
Overall
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,
car
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 ownership had some fluctuations over the given period. Percentages of households with two
cars
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 experienced an upward trend.
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 no
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those
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 with no
car
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 showed a downward trend throughout the period. At the beginning of the period, households without
cars
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 recorded the highest percentage around 47%. It plummeted in 2007.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words car, cars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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