The graph belows shows the average daily sales of selected food items at the Brisk Cafe, by seasons.
The given bar chart illustrates information about daily sales by food aspects in five different categories,
such
as hot caffeine, iced coffee
, ice
cream, soup and salad in winter and summer. Overall
, it is noticeable, that hot coffee
has by far the highest amount of serving.
To begin
with, as the graph shows the different kinds of foods and drinks proportions are nearly equal since the numbers are hovered
between approximately 22 and 40. Change to the active voice
hover
have hovered
By contrast
, in winter the average sales are significantly fluctuating due to
numbers being between nearly 2 and 75. Furthermore
, in winter hot caffeine and soup have the highest ratio in total with the quantity of 75 and 50.
Following
this
, ice
cream and salad have almost the same number of servings with 20 total, while
iced coffee
witnessed a huge declining trend with almost zero quantity. Additionally
, in summer ice
coffee
has levelled up to 40 such
as ice
cream which increased to 35. Finally
, hot coffee
, soup and salad have almost the same totals in order to the amounts are 30, 25 and 25.Submitted by palvdori on
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