You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have recently gone to live in a new city. You want to let an English-speaking friend who lives in another country know about it. Write a letter to your English-speaking friend. In your letter: explain why you have gone to live in the new city describe the place where you are living invite your friend to come and see you Write at least 150 words.
Dear Suman,
I hope everything is going well. I wanted to tell you that I moved to London
last
month.
As you know I passed my RN exam and need training under a qualified doctor. I tried to find a job in Woodstock but didn't get any response. I found it there and don't want to miss this
opportunity.
Here, I'm living downtown which is also
known as the heart of the city. London is a very beautiful city with all facilities
in it. There is one Gurudwara, government hospital, restaurants and so on. Houses are very big Correct article usage
the facilities
as
compared to the old city. I live in a Change preposition
apply
3bedroom
house with my friends. The rooms are very spacious and well Correct your spelling
3-bedroom
furinshed
. I was amazed to see Correct your spelling
furnished
this
.
It's been a long time since we met. Are you free this
weekend? I really miss you and dying to show you my new house.
I'm waiting for your reply.
Lots of love,
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Task Achievement
Try to include more specific details about your experiences or thoughts regarding the new city to enrich your letter.
Coherence & Cohesion
For a more natural flow, consider linking your paragraphs using cohesive devices such as conjunctions, pronouns, and transition words.
Task Achievement
Your letter effectively covers all the points required by the task: explaining your move, describing your new living situation, and inviting your friend.
Coherence & Cohesion
Your greeting and closing are appropriately friendly and match the informal letter format well.