You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have recently gone to live in a new city. You want to let an English-speaking friend who lives in another country know about it. Write a letter to your English-speaking friend. In your letter: explain why you have gone to live in the new city describe the place where you are living invite your friend to come and see you Write at least 150 words.

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Dear Suman, I hope everything is going well. I wanted to tell you that I moved to London

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month. As you know I passed my RN exam and need training under a qualified doctor. I tried to find a job in Woodstock but didn't get any response. I found it there and don't want to miss

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opportunity. Here, I'm living downtown which is

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known as the heart of the city. London is a very beautiful city with all

facilities

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the facilities

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in it. There is one Gurudwara, government hospital, restaurants and so on. Houses are very big

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compared to the old city. I live in a

3bedroom

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3-bedroom

house with my friends. The rooms are very spacious and well

furinshed

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furnished

. I was amazed to see

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. It's been a long time since we met. Are you free

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weekend? I really miss you and dying to show you my new house. I'm waiting for your reply. Lots of love, ABC

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Task Achievement

Try to include more specific details about your experiences or thoughts regarding the new city to enrich your letter.

Coherence & Cohesion

For a more natural flow, consider linking your paragraphs using cohesive devices such as conjunctions, pronouns, and transition words.

Task Achievement

Your letter effectively covers all the points required by the task: explaining your move, describing your new living situation, and inviting your friend.

Coherence & Cohesion

Your greeting and closing are appropriately friendly and match the informal letter format well.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

161 words

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