The prevention of health problems and illness is more important than treatment and medicines. Government funding should reflect this. To what extent to you agree or disagree?
A healthy life and
exercise
are comprehensive manners to be healthy, and they are essential rather than going to the doctor to get some help. I Agree with this
statement. The minister of health gives attention to this
program
in increasing the people
's habit to active in sports and consuming food with rich nutrition. I will discuss this
topic in this
essay in two parts. Benefit for this
program
and how to do this
.
I start with the benefits that people
get from exercise
. Exercise
is a way to move the body
in sports and make the body
burn some calories resulting from carbohydrates and fat to get energy. For example
, this
process causes the fat in your body
will be lost, and your blood will flow into part of your body
. After that, you feel better than before. In addition
, doing exercise
will impact your cost. With a healthy body
, you do not need to pay the doctor to go for a consultation and get a receipt.
How does the program
do? if you want to go to exercise
and get useful from them, you must pay attention to this
role, that is
, frequency, intensity, and time. Frequency is how many times people
do the exercise
in one week. Intensity is how heavy the exercise
people
do. Time is how long the exercise
people
do in one time practice. All these items must be included in an exercise
program
. For instance
. the person does practice three times in one week. doing exercise
in thirty minutes, and the intensity of exercise
is 80% of maximum abilities.
in conclusion. Exercise
is a comprehensive manner to be healthy and this
way can decrease the cost to disappear the sick from the public.Submitted by endangsepdanius on
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