Living in big cities has a negative effect on people’s health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
More and more
people
are moving to cities, although
, living in big cities has a negative effect on society's health
. Unfortunately, I agree with this
extent, so, in this
essay, I will discuss why I think so by describing reasons like air
spoiling and stress
.
At first,
is the quality of the air
. Due to
the enormous number of cars and carbon dioxide emissions from factories, the air
is very polluted. In addition
, megalapolises have more buildings than trees, because to air
doesn't contain enough oxygen to be clean, so people
breathing that air
have allergies or illnesses. As an example, in Almaty, the air
is so polluted there, as a result
, there is smog and the townspeople of that city have poor health
.
Secondly
, stress
. There are always rushes, many arguments, etc in towns, and due to
such
stress
causing things on a daily basis individuals' mental health
is damaged. Moreover
, citizens can forget to pay attention to their mental health
and just work the whole day, in the end, because of fatigue people
can end their lives by suicide. For example
, Japan's big cities struggle with it,because of the high rate of suicide, their people
are very hardworking and spend most of the time doing their work in an office, it's such
a big problem there, so companies even hire people
who should kick workers out after working hours.
To sum up
, I believe, that people
's health
has a negative effect on large metropolises and stress
and air
are one of the main reasons for it.Submitted by satkalialbina07 on
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