Living in big cities has a negative effect on people’s health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

More and more
people
are moving to cities,
although
, living in big cities has a negative effect on society's
health
. Unfortunately, I agree with
this
extent, so, in
this
essay, I will discuss why I think so by describing reasons like
air
spoiling and
stress
. At
first,
is the quality of the
air
.
Due to
the enormous number of cars and carbon dioxide emissions from factories, the
air
is very polluted.
In addition
, megalapolises have more buildings than trees, because to
air
doesn't contain enough oxygen to be clean, so
people
breathing that
air
have allergies or illnesses. As an example, in Almaty, the
air
is so polluted there,
as a result
, there is smog and the townspeople of that city have poor
health
.
Secondly
,
stress
. There are always rushes, many arguments, etc in towns, and
due to
such
stress
causing things on a daily basis individuals' mental
health
is damaged.
Moreover
, citizens can forget to pay attention to their mental
health
and just work the whole day, in the end, because of fatigue
people
can end their lives by suicide.
For example
, Japan's big cities struggle with it,because of the high rate of suicide, their
people
are very hardworking and spend most of the time doing their work in an office, it's
such
a big problem there, so companies even hire
people
who should kick workers out after working hours.
To sum up
, I believe, that
people
's
health
has a negative effect on large metropolises and
stress
and
air
are one of the main reasons for it.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Urban sprawl
  • Respiratory ailments
  • Overcrowdedness
  • Sedentary lifestyle
  • Healthcare facilities
  • Mental well-being
  • Chronic stress
  • Immune system
  • Noise pollution
  • Air quality
  • Health disparities
  • Recreational areas
  • Obesity
  • Dietary habits
  • Physical inactivity
  • Green spaces
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